phenomen a book

This was actually the first story I ever tried to write back in highschool. It never got past the first chapter, and I essentially wrote down twenty ideas and tried to incorporate them all together. It didn''''t really mesh well, and it was supposed to be about Captain Lionnel Dutch as the title suggests. He was a man who worked for a galactic empire that scouted out new regions and was suddenly sucked into a random tear in space or wormhole type thing onto a planet that existed at the base of roots the size of stars. It won''''t go further than one chapter, but I thought I should put my first out there.