phenomen a book

This is a draft version of my series "Terrestrial Paradise." It is a SIGNIFICANTLY darker version of the canon story, focusing more on isolationism in a confined space--less action and more drama. When writing it, I was thinking deeply about depression and human nature. This 50+ chapter version emphasized that. If you''''re reading the new version (not out yet), this should serve as an interesting contrast. And if you''''re a reader of both, hopefully the comparison between this version and the old are entertaining for you.