phenomen a book

This story is about a man who gets reincarnated and will become op and you know the rest.this is my first fiction so bear with me. It has a slow start but will pick up as he gets older and can actually adventure and stuff. Reviews and comments are appreciated do i know what to fix and improve thank you. (Haitus) will come back to this eventually Statistics Overall Score .star-3151-overall-008b7904f3e044e18963cdb266fb0401:after{ width: 86.447% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 7,318 Average Views : 1,830 Followers : 58 Favorites : 8 Ratings : 5 Pages : 22 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author