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This is my first """"book"""" so please give me some tips and pointers. So this is about a boy named alex who wants to become the best martial artist. Statistics Overall Score .star-3292-overall-e646a525992b4f0ab474198d834bd7b4:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 3,674 Average Views : 1,837 Followers : 3 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 9 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author