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Some say time is a river flowing at the same rate everywhere. Others say that time is merely an illusion created by change. But what is change? In the world of Arcturus changes constantly occur through great battles of evil men and wicked women with endless monsters.Hundreds upon thousands of battles won and lost. Hundreds upon thousands of empires rise and fall.Never-ending chaos, eternal carnage in the illusions of time.Nothing has changed, pandemonium ensures. The wheels of fate are beginning to turn and heroes will once again rise, for it is the Heroic Age.This is the saga of two people who break the chains that bind them and create new bonds.Progress is impossible without change, and those who cannot change their minds cannot change anything.– George Bernard ShawThis is my first time writing, I''''m still trying to find my style of writing and trying to explain the world, I''''m not very good at that yet but hopefully I''''ll improve. Please review so I may know what to improve, I have a general plan with certain arcs I wish to do but if you have any ideas please suggest. Statistics Overall Score .star-3828-overall-9c1abc5e39ee4bac9f7211be0f1c3764:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 847 Average Views : 847 Followers : 2 Favorites : 2 Ratings : 0 Pages : 7 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author