phenomen a book

This is pretty much a story of what if when you died some powerful being let you make a custom body for your next life. This is my first attempt at a fantasy story any advice is welcome. I''''m unsure about what tags to add so ill just get to that as it comes. Point out any errors you see i don''''t like them much and it may help me make less in the future. Most likely i will have issues with rules i am ignorant of if you notice it feel free to inform me i want to improve. Statistics Overall Score .star-3826-overall-8cfe9462ecb64062b7ec07126da0db90:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 3,204 Average Views : 1,068 Followers : 10 Favorites : 2 Ratings : 0 Pages : 15 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author Mysterious Light