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Lang returns to his family after years of travel only to find it exterminated by his best friend.After a battle against his friend his soul gets locked in the void.After years he manages to escape from the void only to find a twisted game of fate awaiting him.Chapters will be of 2500 words. I''''m writing Void Martial God along with my other fiction Everlasting Ice Mistress http://royalroadl.com/fiction/4180If you find grammar errors or plootholes don''''t just say ''''This story suck'''' but help me to improve by pointing my errors, thanks.Additional tags: Xianxia Statistics Overall Score .star-4051-overall-d1176a38594d4846bc0c1b8f82953572:after{ width: 94.9007% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 21,055 Average Views : 2,632 Followers : 98 Favorites : 27 Ratings : 7 Pages : 79 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author Peerless Normal Dude