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"Welcome to the Universe of Aurelia!" These were the words spoken by Zenid Corp when they released info about their new VRMMORPG. They said it would be groundbreaking, mind boggling, and view changing.They said you would see AI in a whole new light.Will these words prove true?Or will Zenid''''s promise fall flat?.......Who knows. This isn''''t a story about them it''''s a story about a laidback, quirky, slightly perverted young man named Derrick Ashport aka Nortaz.Join him as he adventures through space, learns mystery psionics, and tries to build up one of the most deadly and rotten (quite literally) harems ever heard of in a game all while subconsciously trying to avoid his childhood friend!(Cover picture is placeholder. The number and gray thing irritated me)____________________________________________________________________________This is my first story and as such it WILL more than likely lack in most places. I''''m more than willing for all criticism and suggestions for how it will go and names for places, people, and items. Also don''''t worry this isn''''t some harem focused story story wise though the MC does try to go for it but not until later. And yes he will notice a harem is forming. Statistics Overall Score .star-6304-overall-56347d9fcdab4667ae9ad47f8dcf0622:after{ width: 75.4025% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 21,221 Average Views : 1,929 Followers : 76 Favorites : 15 Ratings : 4 Pages : 43 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author Novice Necrowarrior