Okay, so I couldn't keep writing with the nagging head voice telling me to go back and fix everything extensively. Instead of doing anything writing related, I got back into boxing.

  That was fun. Still is.

  A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.

  Also quit smoking, and that made a world of a difference in the feel-good department, which means I'm no longer feeling as severely depressed or desperate to speed run writing stories and really want to do Storm King justice.

  So I'm gonna drop a poll.

  Thanks to everyone who read this in advance and to everyone who votes!

  Yours Truly, Origin.