Currently workshopping the entire novel and rewriting it from the ground up, with a more polished writing style. I don't think chapter length will increase significantly, and the first few chapters will most likely be the longest just due to the incredible amount of System nonsense I have to go through. I'm changing Qinglong's character entirely to make the novel just a bit more bearable, and Kuan Yin is experiencing a decently hefty workshopping as well. Aside from all of that, I have a more concrete vision on the actual world the characters are inhabiting, the direction I'm taking it in, and the pacing I want to use to achieve this. All that said, A Mortal's Immortal Folley will be returning once all chapters have been sufficiently revamped! Sorry for the long wait everyone. Ch0 and Ch1 are polished and published, and available in place of where the previous Ch0 and Ch1 had been. Ch2 has been replaced by a notice that it is currently being workshopped, and each subsequent chapter will be taken down as the barrier between the old story and new story. One will subsume the other, as is the destiny of many things. I hope you all enjoy the direction this is now headed towards.
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The entire novel, previously, had been written during spare time in class. So it was short, disconnected, and random. Now that I have free time to dedicate to it having graduated and settled down after moving and getting all my personal things in order, I hope you'll see the qualitative leap.