So I know I might regret this, but I am currently going back through, making notes of any promises I implied in the story and editing along the way.

  That being said, I am opening up this space for people to make suggestions and comments on how I can improve continuty, characterization, spelling, grammer, and anything else that people think can be improved.

  If you come across this story on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen from Royal Road. Please report it.

  One thing I seem to get marked down on for reviews is either story or characterization.

  If I am not getting things across as well as I should be, then I will take happily take suggestions.

  Also, I will to renow my ever present plea for ratings and reviews. Trust me, I live for these things.

  You guys are awesome,

  Foxmoor