"The 'Tower of Silence' rose in the heart of New Sheba like a black needle piercing the liver of the sky. But its true terror lay not in its height, but in its 'roots' that delved hundreds of meters underground—where secrets are kept and souls are erased.
?'Stay here, Saleh. If I do not return before the steam-cock crows, run and do not look back,' I said, gripping the handle of my 'Severing Dagger.' The cold metal in my temple throbbed with a painful rhythm, as if a copper scorpion was trying to burrow its way into my brain.
?Through the 'Sentinel’s Stake,' I saw the breach in the tower’s security. It wasn't a flaw in the iron, but in the 'timing' of the guards' pulses. I crawled through cooling pipes, the heat nearly searing my skin, until I reached the 90th floor sub-surface. The place reeked of sulfur, echoing with non-human whispers emanating from the chambers of spiritual torture.
?The Stranger: The Fate-Stealer
?I reached Naji’s cell. He was suspended by magnetic chains, a massive copper helmet covering his head, connected to wires snaking into the ceiling. His body shuddered as memories of Marib leaked from his mind in the form of fading 'light-images' projected onto the walls.
?'Naji!' I cried out, lunging with my dagger to shatter the chains.
?But before my blade could touch the metal, time froze. Literally. The steam froze in the air; the hum of machinery died. From the dark corner of the room, a figure emerged that my 'Sentinel' senses had failed to detect.
?He wore a long cloak of black feathers that absorbed all light, and a simple white mask with a single slit for eyes. He didn't walk; he 'glid' over reality itself.
?'Attiya... you think you are saving your brother, when you are merely "bait" on the hook of eternity,' the stranger said, his voice coming from everywhere and nowhere.
?'Who are you? What do you want with Naji?' I tried to move, but my body was pinned by an irresistible force.
?'I am the collector of the "Lost Fabric." And Naji holds in his mind the map that fell from the era of the Slaughtered King. He is not yours now... he belongs to History.'
?The stranger reached toward Naji. With a single touch, Naji, the chains, the helmet, and the purple light vanished as if they had never existed. The stranger faded away into a black rift that snapped shut, leaving behind the scent of an ancient perfume unknown to Sheba for centuries.
?The Trap: The Ritual of Flaying
?The moment the stranger vanished, time surged back violently. The door burst open, and a squad of 'Covenant Guards' led by an officer in heavy armor bearing the rank 'Fourth Stake: The Melter' stormed in.
?'Seize the hybrid!' the officer roared.
?I fought like a madman, my dagger slicing through their armor like paper, but they were too many. They beat me with 'Pulse' batons until my ribs cracked, dragging me by my hair through cold corridors to a room called the 'Sanctuary of Purification.'
?There, I was hung by my wrists from iron hooks dangling from the ceiling. They stripped me of my tattered shirt, and the officer readied a strange whip. It wasn't leather; it was made of fine copper wires tipped with magnetic carnelian blades.
?'The First Lash!'
?The whip tore through the flesh of my back, but the pain wasn't just physical. With every lash, I felt the whip stealing a 'pulse' of my power. The flaying targeted my soul, trying to uproot the 'Sentinel’s Stake' from within me.
?'Where did the Thief go? Where is your brother?' the officer asked, raising the whip again.
?'I... don't... know,' I choked out, blood dripping from my mouth onto the cold floor.
?'The second... third... tenth lash!'
?My back became a map of blood and tattered flesh. With every strike, I saw distorted visions: I saw Hameed smiling at me, Mansour screaming on the battlefield, and the face of the white-masked stranger laughing in the dark.
?'Speak, son of Marib! Sheba has no mercy for those who steal its secrets!' the officer yelled, coming down with all his might. I lost consciousness for moments before being jolted awake by a spray of salted, electrified water on my wounds.
?The Wreckage in the Cell
?When the flaying ended, they threw me into a narrow solitary cell—no water, no light. My body was a ruin; my back burned as if I were lying on the embers of Ghadha wood. But amidst that agony, something strange happened.
?The metal piece in my temple began to 'grow,' fusing with my skull with even greater intensity. The flaying and the torture hadn't broken me; they had 'smelted' my humanity with the city’s dark power.
?Naji was kidnapped by a force that doesn't belong to this world... Hameed is beneath the earth... Mansour is missing... Saleh is alone outside... and I am here, being lashed unto death.
?But in the darkness of the cell, I began to hear a hidden voice. It wasn't the voice of a guard or a prisoner. It was the voice of the city’s gears themselves. I began to understand the language of steel."The cell tightened around me, its cold walls oozing with the rust of lost souls. My back no longer felt the pain; my body had moved past screaming into a state of "petrification." Each lash had left a deep trench in my flesh, but those wounds began to absorb the cell’s steam, as if my cells were replacing blood with mechanical oils to keep me alive.
?Suddenly, the "Observer’s Stake" vibrated in my mind. I didn't see with my eyes; I saw through the "vibrations of iron." I saw two guards dragging a frail body through the long corridor toward the Arena. It was a shivering body, wearing the remnants of a Yemeni Thobe I knew all too well.
?"Saleh!" I whispered, his name escaping my cracked lips like a gunshot.
?They had captured him. Saleh, who had never raised a knife in his life except to slaughter a ram, whose only dream was to return to herding sheep in the valleys of Ancient Sheba, was now being led like a sacrifice to the Combat Arena. And worse, my foresight revealed the bitter truth: the opponent waiting for him, the beast he would be ordered to kill, was none other than Mansour.
?The Arena: The Scent of Gunpowder and the Crowd
?The guards kicked open my cell door. They didn't lash me this time; instead, they dragged me like a corpse and threw me into the "Display Cage" overlooking the Arena. They wanted me to watch. They wanted the "Observer" to witness the collapse of his family as the ultimate form of psychological torture.
?The Arena was a colossal pit in the heart of the city, surrounded by towering stands teeming with thousands of people in luxury coats and mechanical eyes. They screamed, waving bets written on copper chips, hungry to see "flesh" torn apart by "steel."
?In the center of the pit, old bloodstains had dried to a coal-black hue. Suddenly, the automated announcer roared through speakers that sounded like the trumpets of Doomsday:
?"Ladies and Gentlemen... from the depths of forgotten time, we present to you: 'The Wandering Barbarian' versus 'The Trembling Servant'... a clash of kin for the survival of the fittest!"
?Mansour: The Mechanical Monstrosity
?The opposing gate creaked open, and a "thing" emerged that I no longer recognized. This was Mansour, but he was no longer my cousin who joked with me in the cave. He had undergone "Forced Loading." His right arm had been replaced by massive iron claws spinning with steam gears, and his left eye had been gouged out to plant a red "Thermal Sensor" that glowed with madness.
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?He panted, black steam huffing from his mouth, his back covered in wires connected to a small engine bolted to his spine. He was under the influence of "Oily Stupor," a drug that erases memory and leaves only the instinct to kill.
?On the other side, the guards shoved Saleh into the Arena. He looked tiny, naked save for a tattered loincloth, holding a trembling copper spear. Saleh looked around in a daze, and when his eyes fell on Mansour, the spear slipped from his hand.
?"Mansour? My cousin! It’s me, Saleh!" he cried, his voice drowning in the roar of the bloodthirsty crowd.
?The Impossible Duel: The Stake vs. The Soul
?Mansour did not respond. The engine on his back let out a sharp screech, and he lunged toward Saleh with a speed no human should possess. He was moving with the "Ravaging Stake" they had sharpened within him to become a body-cleaving machine.
?"Don't do it, Mansour! Please!" I screamed from behind the bars of my cage, but my voice was a ghost.
?Mansour leapt into the air, his iron claws gleaming under the blinding Arena lights. Saleh threw himself to the ground in terror, and Mansour soared over him, slamming into the stone wall and shattering it with a single blow.
?Mansour turned, his red eye whirring as it locked onto his "prey." He began to walk toward Saleh with heavy steps, dragging his claw on the ground to strike sparks of fire.
?"O Lord... O Lord, save us!" Saleh was crawling backward, tears washing the Arena dust from his face.
?In that moment, something unexpected happened. Driven by the immense psychological pressure, the "Observer’s Stake" fused even deeper into my mind. I managed to "hack" into the frequency controlling Mansour’s engine. I saw the "Spiritual Thread" connecting him to the drugs.
?I sent a "Pulse" through the air, trying to wake Mansour from his mechanical coma. Mansour! Remember the cave! Remember the carnelian! Remember Hameed!
?Mansour froze. His head jerked violently, and he began striking his own head with his iron claw as if trying to expel an echo within his mind. The red eye began to flicker and fade.
?"Attiya...?" The word escaped Mansour’s mouth, distorted by the grinding of gears.
?The Company Intervenes: Game Over
?Seeing that Mansour was regaining consciousness, the Arena overseers panicked about their lost bets. The officer in the Royal Box slammed a red button.
?"Activate Frenzy Mode!"
?Mansour let out a heart-wrenching scream. The wires on his back discharged high-voltage electricity into his nerves. His body convulsed, and his red eye turned a dark, abyssal purple. He lost all control.
?He surged toward Saleh like lightning. Saleh couldn't even run; he was paralyzed with terror as the iron claw rose to split him in two.
?"MANSOUUUUUUR!" I screamed at the top of my lungs, feeling the "Stake" in my temple explode.
?At that critical second, the Arena roof suddenly split open. A "Meteor Arrow" descended from the sky—just like the one that killed me in the first vision—but it wasn't aimed at Saleh or Mansour. It was aimed at the Arena's Main Power Core.
?The Arena exploded in a thick fog, and the lights died. Amidst the chaos, the White-Masked Stranger (the kidnapper of Naji) appeared. He stood between Mansour and Saleh, and with a wave of his hand, he froze the guards who tried to intervene.
?"Playing with time requires an audience more refined than these brutes," the stranger said in his calm, irritating tone.
?He looked at me in my cage, then at Mansour and Saleh. "Attiya... the 'Company' has ruined your skins, but I shall fix your fates in my own way."
?He reached out, and a black rift opened beneath Mansour and Saleh’s feet. "Naji awaits you on the 'Other Side'... as for you, Attiya, you have work to do here. You are the 'Stake' that will bind the past to this monstrous future."
?Before I could say a word, Saleh and Mansour vanished into the rift. I was left alone in the cage amidst a shattered arena and guards slowly regaining their senses.
?Epilogue: Birth of the Rebel Stake
?They were all gone. Hameed in the grave... Naji, Mansour, and Saleh with the mysterious stranger in a dimension I did not know. I remained alone—Attiya, who was no longer fully human, nor fully machine.
?I looked at my hand; copper scales had completely covered my forearm. I no longer felt weak. The flaying, the torture, and seeing my brothers led to their deaths had smelted my soul into the "Great Observer’s Stake."
?"You have made a mistake, people of Sheba," I whispered, shattering the bars of the cage with a hand that no longer knew softness. "You thought you were breaking us, but you were only 'sharpening' our blade."
?The city now moans under the weight of my existence. I can hear every engine, every gear, every pulse of gunpowder in this steel forest. I will no longer seek escape... I will seek the "Great Engineer," and I will tear this world down upon his head to return time to its rightful course.?"I emerged from the ruins of the 'Great Arena,' and my body was no longer my own. The blood dripping from the gashes on my back—the scars of the flaying—had mingled with the arena’s industrial oils. Yet, a miracle occurred: the wounds did not heal like human flesh; they 'welded' like molten copper. The scars left by the whip began to glow with a deep purple hue, forming raised 'Musnad Inscriptions' along my spine. They were not mere ornaments; they were energy circuits, absorbing the city’s roar and surging it through my veins.
?'Escape is no longer an option,' I whispered to myself, my voice echoing with a deep mechanical resonance. 'The choice now is eradication.'
?I looked at my hand; copper scales had crawled across my fingers, and I could now 'see' the flow of electricity in the very air. I needed no maps; the entirety of New Sheba throbbed within my mind thanks to the 'Great Observer’s Stake.' I felt the vaults of Carnelian at the base of the Hanging Palace, and I sensed the 'Great Engineer' at the summit, watching through screens of crystal."
?Part II: Storming the Hanging Palace
?"The Hanging Palace floated above the city, held aloft by massive gravity engines and tethered to the earth by steel chains, each wider than a grand street. Instead of climbing, I chose to speak my new language.
?I placed my hand upon the base of one of the chains and closed my eyes.
'You insatiable gears... answer me,' I commanded the Machine Spirit.
?In that instant, the chain surrendered to my will. The entire Lower City shook as the great chain coiled and moved like a gargantuan serpent, lifting me with the speed of lightning toward the peak. I pierced the clouds, the cold air lashing my face, but I felt no chill. I was ablaze with the fire of vengeance and the hope of reclaiming what was lost.
?I shattered the crystal window of the Palace’s Grand Hall. The place was silent, reeking of ozone and royal incense. In the center, a massive engine hung from the ceiling, and in its heart lay the 'Primal Carnelian'—the source feeding this monstrous era."
?Part III: Confronting the Great Engineer
?"From behind a throne made of golden gears, an old man emerged. But his body was a highly advanced mechanical skeleton; he had no eyes, only hollow sockets from which a cold white light emitted.
?'Attiya... the Stake that refused to break,' the Engineer said, his voice like the rustling of ancient parchment. 'You think you attack me to save your brothers or reclaim your time, but in truth, you are "completing" the design. You are the missing piece in the engine of eternity.'
?'You stole our lives, murdered Hameed, and turned my kin into monstrosities!' I roared, the Musnad inscriptions on my back igniting with light. 'I am here to reclaim the Carnelian and tear down this falsehood.'
?The Engineer laughed bitterly. 'The Carnelian is not a stone to be stolen, you fool. It is a "Covenant" between time and matter. If you shatter it, you will not return to Marib... rather, you and everything you know will dissolve into nothingness. Are you ready to die for a mirage?'"
?Part IV: The Final Battle and the Struggle for Existence
?"I did not answer with words; I lunged with the power of the 'Sentinel.' The battle transcended the limits of the mind. The Engineer shifted the hall’s geometry with a touch—walls became ceilings, and ceilings became copper blades descending upon me.
?I channeled the 'scars' on my back, unleashing 'Nahit' waves that pulverized the mechanical weapons before they could touch me. I saw the 'Seconds to Come' with absolute clarity, dancing through his strikes as if I were dancing with Time itself.
?I reached the central engine and extended my mechanical hand toward the Primal Carnelian. I felt a heat surpassing that of the sun. At that moment, the specter of Hameed materialized before me.
?'Do not do it, Attiya... if you touch the Carnelian with the intent to destroy, the souls of Naji, Mansour, and Saleh will be lost in the void forever,' Hameed’s phantom whispered.
?My hand stopped centimeters away. The Engineer smirked maliciously. 'Do you see? You are trapped between your love and your will.'"
?Part V: The Big Bang and the Impossible Return
?"But I remembered something the White-Masked Stranger had told me in my cell: 'You are the Stake that will bind the past to the future.' He did not mean a physical tether, but a 'spiritual' one.
?I did not try to shatter the Carnelian; I tried to 'contain' it. I used my mechanical body as a Bridge. The Musnad inscriptions on my back began to draw the energy from the Carnelian and pump it into the city’s veins.
?'What are you doing? You will explode!' the Engineer shrieked in terror as he saw his machine collapsing.
?The city began to vanish around me. The copper towers melted into sand. The steam turned into a torrential rain. The Great Engineer crumbled like burnt paper. I felt my body tearing apart; the mechanical half refused to return, while the human half pulled me toward the past.
?In that moment of absolute agony, a temporal rift opened. Through it, I saw Ancient Marib... and I saw Hameed standing at the entrance of the cave, alive, looking at the Carnelian before we ever touched it."
?Epilogue: Wreckage of a Man, a Lost Dream
?"I woke with dust in my mouth. The sun lashed my face, and the wind whistled through the shattered columns of Marib. I looked around; I was alone. No trace of the Hanging Palace, no trace of the gears, and no trace of my brothers.
?I felt my back; there were no whip scars, only faint, carnelian-colored 'tattoos' of Musnad scripts that no one but I could read. I felt my hand; it was flesh and bone once more, yet I could feel the 'pulse' of metals deep beneath the earth.
?I had returned... but to what time? Did I survive alone? Or did I create a new reality where my brothers live in peace while I am exiled in the wreckage of history?
?I stood in the middle of the desert, alone with the 'Observer’s Stake' that never sleeps, watching the horizon... waiting for the White-Masked Stranger to appear and tell me that the journey has not yet ended."

