ok, so guys/ gals this is just and update as you might know I change the chapter after every 5 parts so chapter three is coming up on Thursday this chapter is just for questions and comments. oh, any maybe some suggestions. remember my story is always liable to change. oh and the next story part is coming out on Thursday as promised. sorry for being not as active so ask your question and have fun peace out

  plus I have added the mini-story that will be in the spoiler just because I can

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  after joining the war for planet earth our hero was now a secret weapon of mass destruction he would rage thru the battlefield hunting mercilessly killing anything that got in his way his rampage was so abundant that both humans and aliens actually started trying to join forces to stop him what will happen know