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Story update - Feedback

  Hey all!

  First - thanks to everyone who is loving on the story. I wrote Arin for a lot of reasons (one of which was kind of the flow and 'feels' of the story).

  Good news - I'm almost done with book 1. I've been blowing and going this month thanks to my wife giving me more time to write and it's paid off. Tons of 10,000+ words day (one Saturday I managed my first 25k+ word day.) Of course writing 2,000-3,200 words an hour helps. I'm projecting about 4 books for this story... maybe 5. I have book 2 outlined, and book 3 with some notes.

  Few things:

  Arin's speech. Spoiler here: It changes.

  As he progresse's we'll see Spaces between words, and eventually... well you should be able to guess what comes after that ;)

  Mistakes - I know I got a ton. I haven't had a ton of editing time between chapters like I want. I've been juggling a lot of stories.

  Arin

  This tale has been unlawfully lifted from Royal Road. If you spot it on Amazon, please report it.

  Ultimate Level 1

  Loop Breaker

  Battle Through the Nine Realms

  A cultivation Story (dropping Dec 25th).

  So I'm good spot-wise on all these stories right now, especially with my wife giving me time to write. I'll be on 'break' For 10 days in December (17th-27th). I'll be on some, but will be all family time, so I'm not going to be on here a 'ton'

  I got someone to help me somewhat with some of the fixes. They're taking notes, making small changes. Between Patreon, my Google Doc folder, and RR, there are a few spaces to update, and they have access to them. I'm trying to stay on top of major issues.

  Like today - the app is causing problems with the story (but the webpage isn't). Everything should be good once they fix it.

  I'm trying to remember to make sure I update stuff as I've updated google docs, patreon and then on RR.

  Story stuff - Someone reminded me (I forgot) I changed Levi's last name after chapter 5... which I forgot (using my last one felt wrong after thinking about it), so I changed in story, but forgot to fix in documents people are reading (about to fix that now).

  For this chapter - I want to have one to reply to and fix major things.

  So if you have something major you've noticed - post below and I'll try to get to it this week (need to work on UL1 some so I can finish book 11).

  The good news - you've got chapters already scheduled through 1/10 and that's just to chapter 40 (which there are close to 70 planned for book 1).

  Thanks for the love!

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