Not pain.
Not confusion.
Weakness.
It crept through every muscle like a quiet disease. My arms felt too light. My breathing felt shallow. Even the simple act of sitting upright required more effort than it should have.
I opened my eyes slowly.
The ceiling above me was cracked.
Not the painted marble ceiling of the imperial palace.
Not the silk canopies of the royal chambers.
Just cheap plaster with a flickering light hanging from exposed wires.
I remained still for a moment, letting my breathing stabilize.
The smell in the room was unfamiliar—medicine, dust, and rain-soaked concrete.
So this is not the afterlife.
I slowly pushed myself upright.
My body moved… awkwardly.
As if I had been placed inside a poorly fitted suit of armor.
My fingers curled in front of my eyes.
Thin.
Pale.
Weak.
These were not the hands of someone trained in the imperial sword schools.
For as long as I could remember, my body had been shaped by discipline. Sword training at dawn. Horseback combat before noon. Martial drills until sunset.
The royal tutors often said a crown prince must master both rule and war.
And so I had.
But the body I now inhabited held none of that strength.
I swung my legs off the bed.
My balance faltered for a brief moment before stabilizing.
Unacceptable.
Even after death, I refuse to move like an old man.
I stood up slowly, forcing the unfamiliar muscles to obey.
The room was small.
A narrow bed.
A wooden desk covered in empty medicine bottles.
A single window where rain tapped softly against the glass.
Everything about the room suggested poverty.
Temporary living.
A place someone stayed in because they had nowhere better to go.
My gaze finally landed on a mirror leaning against the wall.
I walked toward it.
The reflection staring back at me was not mine.
Dark hair.
Sharp but exhausted eyes.
A young face that looked no older than sixteen.
And a body that looked as though a strong wind might break it.
I studied the reflection in silence.
“…Interesting.”
The moment I spoke, memories flooded into my mind.
They did not belong to me.
A boy running through hospital hallways.
A tall man smoking in silence while doctors spoke quietly nearby.
Whispers.
Mockery.
Cold stares.
His name was David Lee.
Sixteen years old.
Son of Victor Lee, leader of the Black Serpent Syndicate.
Even someone unfamiliar with this world could understand what that meant.
A criminal empire.
Power built through fear and violence.
Yet David Lee, the heir to such a man, lived a life of quiet humiliation.
His body had always been weak.
Chronic illness.
Fragile lungs.
Doctors, medicine, endless treatments.
Victor Lee despised weakness.
And David embodied it.
His father visited rarely.
When he did, the conversations were short.
Cold.
Practical.
The boy received money.
But never respect.
Inside the syndicate, things were even worse.
David’s existence was treated like an inconvenience.
The gang members laughed about him openly.
Some pretended he did not exist.
Others called him trash without hesitation.
He endured it for years.
Until tonight.
Rain outside.
A silent room.
A bottle of sleeping pills on the desk.
The boy sat there for nearly twenty minutes.
Thinking.
Hesitating.
Then he swallowed them.
One after another.
No dramatic final words.
No tears.
Just exhaustion.
I watched the memory finish playing like a distant dream.
Then I looked back at the mirror.
The face staring back was still David Lee.
But the eyes had changed.
“…What a waste.”
The boy possessed status.
Money.
Influence.
Yet he allowed himself to be crushed by the opinions of others.
In my previous life, such weakness would have been corrected early.
A prince cannot afford despair.
Before I could think further, something flickered in the air before me.
A faint blue light appeared.
Then words formed across the surface.
SYSTEM INITIALIZING
Host Identity: Arthur Agnes
Current Vessel: David Lee
World Identification: Earth
Compatibility: Confirmed
I observed the floating screen calmly.
In the empire, I had studied ancient magical relics capable of storing knowledge or projecting illusions.
This object seemed similar.
The text shifted.
PRIMARY QUEST
Rise to Power
Objectives:
? Establish Authority
? Expand Influence
? Dominate the Underworld
Failure Condition: Death
Reward: Unknown
I read the message twice.
Then I exhaled slowly.
“So the heavens grant me another battlefield.”
The corner of my mouth lifted slightly.
In my previous life, power had been inherited.
In this life…
It would be taken.
A sudden noise echoed outside the apartment.
Rough voices.
Male.
Unrestrained.
“…Boss said bring the kid down.”
“Why bother? That weakling can barely stand.”
“Still, orders are orders.”
Laughter followed.
I walked toward the door quietly.
Three men stood in the hallway.
All wearing black jackets with a serpent emblem.
Black Serpent Syndicate.
The first man was tall with a scar across his cheek.
The second looked younger, chewing gum loudly.
The third leaned against the wall while lighting a cigarette.
They stopped talking when they saw me.
Not because they respected me.
But because they were mildly surprised I was standing.
The scarred man frowned.
“Oh. The trash is awake.”
The gum-chewing man laughed.
“Didn’t think the pills would fail.”
The smoker exhaled a cloud of smoke.
“You’re lucky, kid. Boss wants to see you.”
Their tone carried no respect.
No caution.
They spoke to me the way soldiers might speak to a stray animal.
Interesting.
I studied them quietly.
In the empire, I had trained in several martial disciplines.
Swordsmanship.
Close combat.
Pressure-point strikes.
Even without a weapon, the human body contains dozens of ways to break another.
But the body I now occupied…
Was far too weak.
If I fought them now, victory would not be guaranteed.
And unnecessary battles are the mark of foolish commanders.
The scarred man snapped his fingers.
“Move.”
I did not respond immediately.
Instead, I tested something.
Slowly, I shifted my stance.
Left foot slightly forward.
Weight balanced.
A position from the Imperial Close Combat Form.
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Even in this weak body, the movement felt natural.
Years of training are not erased by death.
The men noticed the delay.
The gum-chewing man frowned.
“What are you staring at?”
I tilted my head slightly.
“…Victor Lee.”
The scarred man rolled his eyes.
“Yeah, your old man. You forget who he is?”
“Where is he?”
“Downstairs.”
He turned toward the stairs.
“Now move before I drag you.”
The system screen flickered again in my vision.
SUBQUEST ACTIVATED
Demonstrate Authority
Target: Black Serpent Syndicate
Status: Pending
Authority.
I watched the three men begin walking down the hallway.
None of them looked back.
None of them considered me a threat.
Good.
Underestimation is the most convenient weapon a ruler can possess.
I followed them quietly.
Each step allowed me to study the body further.
Weak.
But not unusable.
With proper training, this vessel could become something far more dangerous.
And once that happened…
The underworld of this city would belong to me.
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Chapter 1 — The Prince Who Refused to Die (Part 1)
I died on a battlefield.
Not in a palace.
Not in a throne room.
Not surrounded by loyal guards or kneeling ministers.
Just mud, blood, and the sound of arrows falling like rain.
The sky above the battlefield burned crimson through a curtain of smoke. Broken banners lay scattered across the ground, their once-proud emblems soaked in mud. Corpses surrounded me—soldiers who had sworn loyalty to the empire, and enemies who had come to take it from us.
War always ends the same way.
Steel.
Blood.
Silence.
I tightened my grip on the sword in my hand.
The blade gleamed faintly even in the chaos of battle.
Sol Aurelius.
The imperial sword.
Forged centuries ago and passed down through the bloodline of the Aurelian emperors.
And now held by the last man still standing in this ruined valley.
Me.
Arthur Agnes.
Crown Prince of the Aurelian Empire.
Heir to the throne.
And the target of a perfect ambush.
“Your Highness!”
Sir Roland’s voice broke through the chaos behind me.
“Retreat! We must retreat!”
I did not turn.
My eyes remained fixed on the approaching soldiers closing in from every direction.
Retreat?
There was no retreat left.
The valley was surrounded.
The hills above us were filled with enemy archers.
They had known exactly where we would march.
Exactly where I would stand.
Someone had betrayed us.
Someone within the empire.
That realization should have angered me.
But it did not.
The royal court was built on ambition.
Betrayal was simply another form of politics.
Another wave of enemy soldiers rushed toward me.
I stepped forward calmly.
My sword moved before the thoughts in my mind finished forming.
A horizontal slash.
One man collapsed instantly.
A pivot of my feet.
Another soldier’s spear shattered as my blade cut through the shaft.
Years of imperial combat training guided every movement.
The sword schools of the Aurelian Empire were not designed for beauty.
They were designed for efficiency.
Every strike ended a life.
Every step created space.
But even the most skilled swordsman cannot fight the sky.
I heard the whistle of arrows before I saw them.
Hundreds.
Falling like a storm.
I raised my sword and deflected two.
A third arrow struck the ground beside my foot.
The fourth…
Found the gap in my armor.
Pain exploded through my chest.
The arrow pierced through the seam between the plates of my breastplate and drove deep into my body.
My breath vanished.
My legs weakened.
The battlefield blurred.
I looked down slowly.
Blood was spreading across the metal.
Warm.
Strangely peaceful.
So this is how it ends.
I had imagined my death many times.
Perhaps defending the capital.
Perhaps after decades ruling the empire.
Perhaps betrayed by ministers and assassinated in the palace.
But not like this.
Not by a single arrow on an empty battlefield.
My knees touched the ground.
The sounds of battle faded.
My final thought was calm.
The empire… will have to survive without me.
Then the world disappeared.
Darkness.
Not sleep.
Not death.
Something in between.
Time lost its meaning.
There was no sound.
No pain.
No memory.
Only emptiness.
Until suddenly—
Air rushed into my lungs.
I inhaled sharply.
My eyes snapped open.
The ceiling above me was cracked plaster.
A flickering fluorescent light buzzed faintly.
Rain tapped against a nearby window.
I lay still.
Breathing.
Listening.
Alive.
That was… unexpected.
Slowly, I pushed myself upright.
My body felt wrong immediately.
Weak.
Unbalanced.
Fragile.
I lifted my hands in front of my face.
Thin fingers.
Pale skin.
No scars.
No calluses from years of sword training.
These were not the hands of a warrior.
They were the hands of a sick child.
I swung my legs off the bed and stood up.
My balance faltered for a moment.
Unacceptable.
In my previous life I had spent years mastering the control of my body.
A crown prince must be both ruler and weapon.
Swordsmanship at dawn.
Martial drills before noon.
Strategic studies until midnight.
Strength was not optional.
Yet the body I now inhabited felt like a hollow shell.
I forced my breathing to slow.
Then I began examining the room.
The apartment was small.
A narrow bed.
A wooden desk cluttered with medicine bottles.
A cheap plastic chair.
Rain streaked across the single window overlooking a city skyline filled with glowing lights.
This was not my world.
The conclusion arrived instantly.
I walked toward a mirror leaning against the wall.
The boy staring back at me could not have been older than sixteen.
Black hair.
Pale skin.
A thin frame that suggested long illness.
His eyes, however—
Those eyes were no longer his.
“…Interesting.”
The moment I spoke, memories crashed into my mind.
Fragments of another life.
Hospital corridors.
Doctors speaking quietly.
A tall man smoking in silence.
Laughter behind closed doors.
Mockery.
Isolation.
The boy’s name was David Lee.
Sixteen years old.
Son of Victor Lee, the leader of the Black Serpent Syndicate.
Even without understanding this world fully, I could recognize what that meant.
Power.
Crime.
Violence.
Yet despite being the son of such a man, David Lee lived a miserable life.
His body had always been weak.
Chronic illness.
Fragile lungs.
Constant medication.
Victor Lee hated weakness.
And David embodied it.
The man visited rarely.
When he did, his gaze held only disappointment.
Inside the syndicate, the treatment was worse.
The gang members mocked him openly.
Some ignored him completely.
Others called him trash to his face.
The boy endured it for years.
Until tonight.
The memory played clearly.
Rain outside the window.
A bottle of sleeping pills on the desk.
David sat there silently for a long time.
Then he swallowed them.
One by one.
No dramatic final words.
No tears.
Just quiet surrender.
The memory faded.
I looked back at the mirror.
“…A tragic end.”
Before I could think further, a faint blue glow appeared in the air before me.
Lines of text formed across the surface.
SYSTEM INITIALIZING
Host Identity: Arthur Agnes
Current Vessel: David Lee
World: Earth
Compatibility: Confirmed
I watched the floating screen calmly.
In the Aurelian Empire there existed ancient magical relics capable of projecting knowledge or illusions.
This device felt similar.
The screen shifted.
PRIMARY QUEST
Rise to Power
Objectives:
? Establish Authority
? Expand Influence
? Dominate the Underworld
Failure Condition: Death
Reward: Unknown
I read the message twice.
Then I laughed quietly.
“In my previous life, I was born a crown prince.”
“And now…”
My gaze swept across the cramped apartment.
“…I begin again as the son of criminals.”
The irony was almost amusing.
But power is power.
Whether inherited through a crown or seized through violence.
A sudden noise echoed outside the apartment.
Voices.
Rough.
Unrestrained.
“…Boss said bring the kid down.”
“Why bother? That weakling can barely walk.”
“Still, orders are orders.”
Laughter followed.
The door handle turned.
Three men entered the room without knocking.
All of them wore black jackets marked with a serpent emblem.
Members of the Black Serpent Syndicate.
The first man had a scar across his cheek.
The second chewed gum loudly.
The third leaned against the wall and lit a cigarette.
None of them showed the slightest respect.
The scarred man looked at me with mild annoyance.
“Well look at that. The trash is awake.”
The gum-chewing man snorted.
“Didn’t think the pills would fail.”
The smoker exhaled a cloud of smoke.
“Boss wants to see you.”
Their tone was casual.
Dismissive.
They spoke as though I were nothing more than an inconvenience.
Interesting.
I studied them silently.
In my previous life I had trained in several martial disciplines.
Sword combat.
Close-quarters fighting.
Pressure-point strikes.
Even unarmed, the human body possesses dozens of ways to end a life.
But the body I now inhabited…
Was far too weak.
For now.
The scarred man snapped his fingers.
“Move.”
I did not react immediately.
Instead, I tested something.
Slowly, I shifted my stance.
Left foot forward.
Weight balanced.
A posture from the Imperial Close Combat Form.
Even in this weak body, the movement felt natural.
Years of training do not disappear with death.
The men noticed the pause.
“What are you staring at?” the gum-chewing man asked.
I tilted my head slightly.
“…Victor Lee.”
The scarred man rolled his eyes.
“Yeah. Your old man.”
“Where is he?”
“Downstairs.”
He turned toward the door.
“Now move.”
The system screen appeared again.
SUBQUEST ACTIVATED
Demonstrate Authority
Target: Black Serpent Syndicate
Status: Pending
Authority.
I followed the three men down the hallway.
None of them looked back.
None of them considered me a threat.
Which meant they had already lost.
They simply did not know it yet.
Because the boy they called trash…
Had died.
And the man walking behind them now…
Was a prince.
The hallway smelled faintly of smoke and alcohol.
The three men walked ahead of me without bothering to check if I was keeping up. Their footsteps echoed along the concrete floor, casual and confident, as though they had done this countless times before.
I followed several steps behind.
Not out of obedience.
Out of observation.
The building itself appeared to be some sort of headquarters for the syndicate. The walls were plain concrete, stained in places from years of neglect. Fluorescent lights buzzed overhead, casting a pale glow over the corridor.
Every few meters we passed doors.
Some were open.
Inside I caught glimpses of men counting money, arguing over cards, cleaning weapons.
The smell of gun oil lingered in the air.
So this is the underworld of this world.
Crude.
I had expected something more organized.
Even the lowest military outposts in the empire were cleaner than this.
But perhaps that was precisely why organizations like this thrived.
Chaos is fertile soil for ambition.
The scarred man walking in front of me scratched his neck lazily.
“You’re unusually quiet today.”
The gum-chewing man snorted.
“What’s he gonna say? Apologize for not dying properly?”
They both laughed.
The third man exhaled smoke without turning his head.
“Maybe the pills fried what little brain he had.”
Their conversation continued as if I were not present.
In my previous life, soldiers would have lost their tongues for speaking this way in front of royalty.
Here…
It was simply normal.
Interesting.
I adjusted my breathing as we descended a flight of stairs.
Even walking at this pace made the new body uncomfortable.
The muscles lacked endurance.
The lungs felt shallow.
But that could be corrected.
Bodies can be trained.
Weakness is rarely permanent.
At the bottom of the stairs, the hallway opened into a large underground room.
It resembled a crude lounge.
Several round tables were scattered across the floor, occupied by groups of men drinking, playing cards, or watching television mounted on the wall.
The moment we entered, a few of them glanced toward me.
Then they smirked.
“Look who’s alive.”
“Didn’t think the boss’s kid had that much stubbornness.”
“Or stupidity.”
A ripple of quiet laughter passed through the room.
I ignored it.
Respect cannot be demanded in places like this.
It must be created.
At the far end of the room stood a heavy metal door.
Two men guarded it.
Unlike the others, these two were silent.
Their eyes studied me carefully.
Professional.
Soldiers rather than thugs.
Interesting.
The scarred man approached them.
“Boss said to bring him.”
One of the guards nodded and opened the door.
“Go in.”
The scarred man gestured impatiently toward the doorway.
“Well? Don’t keep him waiting.”
I stepped forward and entered.
The door closed behind me with a dull metallic thud.
The office was surprisingly quiet.
Dim lighting illuminated a large wooden desk positioned near the center of the room. Behind it sat a man in a dark suit, leaning back slightly in his chair.
A cigarette burned between his fingers.
The smoke curled slowly toward the ceiling.
Victor Lee.
David’s memories had shown his face many times.
But seeing him in person carried a different weight.
He was tall even while seated.
Broad shoulders.
Sharp eyes.
A man accustomed to control.
His hair was streaked with early gray, but his expression showed no sign of age.
Only calculation.
He studied me silently for several seconds.
Then he flicked ash from his cigarette.
“You look terrible.”
His voice was calm.
Flat.
Not angry.
Just factual.
I did not respond.
Victor continued watching me.
“You tried to kill yourself.”
Again, not a question.
A statement.
“Yes.”
The answer left my mouth before I could consider another response.
Victor’s expression did not change.
“You failed.”
“Correct.”
Silence returned.
The only sound in the room was the quiet crackling of the cigarette.
Finally Victor leaned forward slightly.
“Why?”
The question hung in the air.
David’s memories contained the answer.
Years of humiliation.
Weakness.
Isolation.
But those reasons belonged to the boy who had died.
They no longer belonged to me.
“I was tired.”
Victor studied my face.
“Tired?”
“Yes.”
“Of what?”
“Existing without purpose.”
The words surprised even me.
Victor’s eyes narrowed slightly.
Something about my tone had caught his attention.
He leaned back again, studying me with new interest.
“You sound different.”
That was inevitable.
A prince raised in royal courts does not speak the same way as a frightened teenager.
But explanations would be pointless.
Instead, I shifted the conversation.
“You summoned me.”
Victor tapped ash into a glass tray.
“Yes.”
He opened a folder on the desk.
“Three days ago one of our warehouses was robbed.”
I remained silent.
“Thirty million dollars worth of product disappeared overnight.”
Victor watched my reaction carefully.
“There were no signs of forced entry.”
Which meant…
“Someone inside allowed it.”
Victor nodded once.
“Correct.”
He closed the folder.
“Do you know why I called you here?”
“No.”
Victor took a slow drag from his cigarette.
“Because someone tried to frame you.”
That was unexpected.
David’s memories showed no involvement with the syndicate’s operations.
Victor continued speaking.
“The rumor spreading among the lower ranks is that you leaked the warehouse location to a rival gang.”
He studied my reaction.
“Convenient story.”
Indeed.
David Lee was weak.
Unpopular.
An easy target.
I folded my arms loosely.
“And you believe this?”
Victor shrugged slightly.
“I believe in evidence.”
“Which is?”
“There is none.”
Interesting.
“So the rumor serves another purpose.”
Victor’s lips curled faintly.
“Exactly.”
The room grew quiet again.
This time Victor spoke more softly.
“Someone inside my organization believes they can manipulate events without my permission.”
His eyes met mine directly.
“And they think using my son as a scapegoat will go unnoticed.”
I considered the situation.
In my previous life, palace politics often worked the same way.
Remove the heir.
Create instability.
Seize opportunity.
The methods differed.
The logic remained identical.
Victor leaned forward again.
“Tell me something.”
“Yes?”
“If someone inside my organization is trying to weaken my authority…”
His voice hardened slightly.
“…what should I do?”
This was not a casual question.
It was a test.
Perhaps he expected a frightened answer.
Perhaps an emotional one.
But those were not the answers of a ruler.
“Eliminate them.”
Victor’s eyebrow rose slightly.
“Direct.”
“Effective.”
He watched me for a moment longer.
Then he laughed quietly.
“Where did that come from?”
“Logic.”
Victor stood up slowly and walked around the desk.
He stopped a few steps away from me.
Up close, the pressure of his presence became more noticeable.
This man had built a criminal empire.
That required intelligence.
And ruthlessness.
He studied my posture carefully.
“You’re standing differently.”
“I am?”
“Yes.”
Victor pointed toward my feet.
“That stance.”
Imperial Close Combat Form.
Of course he noticed.
A man who survives in the underworld learns to read bodies the way generals read battlefields.
“You planning to fight someone?”
“Perhaps.”
Victor chuckled softly.
“Your body can barely stand.”
He stepped closer and tapped my shoulder with one finger.
“Even a mid-level thug in my organization could break you.”
The moment his finger touched my shoulder—
My body reacted automatically.
A pivot of my hips.
My hand moved in a short arc.
Victor’s wrist was suddenly trapped between my fingers.
I twisted gently.
Not enough to injure.
Just enough to demonstrate control.
Victor froze.
His eyes widened slightly.
The room became completely silent.
For three seconds neither of us moved.
Then I released his wrist and stepped back.
Victor slowly rubbed the joint.
“…Where did you learn that?”
“Instinct.”
He stared at me for several seconds.
Then a slow smile spread across his face.
“Well.”
Victor returned to his desk and sat down again.
“That was interesting.”
He lit another cigarette.
“Maybe the pills did change you after all.”
I remained silent.
Victor exhaled smoke thoughtfully.
“Alright.”
He opened a drawer and tossed something across the desk.
A small metal key slid toward me.
“Warehouse seventeen.”
“What about it?”
“It’s where the stolen goods were originally stored.”
Victor leaned back in his chair again.
“If someone inside my organization tried to frame you…”
His eyes sharpened slightly.
“…then perhaps you should investigate it.”
I looked at the key.
“Why me?”
Victor smiled faintly.
“Because if you succeed, it proves you’re not useless.”
“And if I fail?”
Victor shrugged.
“Then everyone will continue believing you’re trash.”
Fair.
As I picked up the key, the blue system screen appeared again.
SUBQUEST UPDATED
Investigate Warehouse 17
Objective: Identify the traitor
Reward: Martial Skill Fragment
Failure: Unknown
Interesting.
Martial skill fragment.
That suggested the system could strengthen this body.
Exactly what I needed.
I closed my hand around the key.
Victor watched me carefully.
“Tell me something, David.”
“Yes?”
“Are you still planning to kill yourself?”
I looked directly at him.
“No.”
Victor raised an eyebrow.
“Why not?”
A faint smile appeared on my lips.
“Because I have work to do.”
Victor stared at me.
Then he laughed again.
“Good.”
He waved his hand dismissively.
“Now get out of my office.”
As I turned toward the door, Victor spoke one final time.
“David.”
I paused.
“Yes?”
“Don’t disappoint me.”
I opened the door and stepped back into the underground lounge.
Dozens of eyes turned toward me.
Some curious.
Some mocking.
None of them understood what had just happened inside that room.
But that would change soon enough.
Because somewhere in this organization…
A traitor was hiding.
And traitors have always been my favorite prey.